Question by kaotiks0ul: are these good thoughts on paper? emotions nomore wen drunk on depression guilt weighs me down like ive known
this lesson, life eats me alive like dark consumes light, maybe in time it fades in the fight, this chip on my shoulder it widens with age, i fueled a fire w/ serenities rage, thru the eyes of a mad man ive seen crystal clear, so i thought when my pleasures were mixed with my fears, i think down on a life b/c we live on the ground, theres no heaven on earth at least not that ive found, i cry for a loss just to save face, selfish these tears so many replaced, in time comes revenge as it staggers so near,a tie that was severed. mine next, do i fear?
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Answer by gespi77
what tha?
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Beautiful, but when you take apart and dissect the meaning of the words your loved ones may feel they have reason to be upset. I have been told that poetry is a healthy way to release your emotions, so continue to write. You’re very talented.